Now that Kell, busy with wedding plans and house buying, has shut up, I feel okay to post the fifth chapter.
I'm complacent on this chapter. I am neither happy or sad at it. I have read it, re-read it, and decided not to edit it, yet. There is something I need to do with it. Well, I think I do. I'm sure I do. I just am unsure what that is currently.
Instead of editing it, I will post it and continue writing later parts of the story.
Again, constructive criticism is welcome.
Yes, at some time I will post Chapter 24. It's written.