I got it all together. There are no bells or whistles, just text. Well, I did put in some links and some colors at least. I'm not completely dull. Visit it by following this link.
The latest installment is only on the blog. It would be a new chapter. There's a place to email me if you have specific comments. I really do like the critiques. Kell gave me one and I used that to flesh out more of Kathryn's character. The latest critique was actually given by Phill (my husband), and I used that to write another section. He also asked for something to happen. Something will happen in the next installment. That is, when I get around to writing it.